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(Msg. 1) Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 2:57 pm
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In one fluid motion Laiva pulled her dagger from its sheath and spun
around her axis, pushing the blade as far from her body as her arm
allowed. The metal described a wide arc, indiscriminately cutting
through air and flesh. Almost dancing Laiva sidestepped, letting the
massive body of the wolf crash into the ground some feet from her.
The maneuver caught the wolves completely by surprise.
Dumbstruck they stared at their leader until the stench of blood
reached their nostrils, filling their hearts with rage, minds with
fury and eyes with madness. As one they turned to throw themselves at
the girl - but the girl was gone.

Laiva hadn't waited for the wolves to come to their senses. Without
transition she went from tumbling to running, not wasting any time on
coming to a halt first. Within a blink of the eyes she had left the
wolves behind and darted through the trees, no longer caring about the
road or even where she was going.
It wasn't until she heard the angry howl, before Laiva
realized running away wasn't much of a solution. She skidded to a halt
and threw her back against a particularly large tree, the trunk wide
enough to cover her back as well as a wall would have. Unfortunately
that left her complete front open for attack. On the tree she would
have been out of reach, but none of the trees had low enough branches
to climb them in a hurry. If she only had anything to defend her. They
dagger was far too short to induce fear... Fire! She needed fire!
She started reciting the spell, careful not to confuse any
syllables. Messing the spell up was unlikely to do anything at all,
much less to harm her, but she doubted that there would be the time
for second try; she could already hear the wolves drawing closer.
The spell was easy enough, though; she had mastered it years
ago. Laiva lively remembered how proud she had been when she had
finally got it working. Her mother on the other hand hadn't been too
happy, not after she had accidentally set the table on fire anyway.
Laiva focused on a dry branch lying before her and the orange
and violet sparks that had so far played around her fingers flew
towards it. The wood started to smoke and small flames erupted from
its surface; a moment later the branch was ablaze.
It hadn't been a moment too early either. The wolves had just
caught up on her and were about to throw themselves at Laiva when the
fire came into life. A wave of primordial fear run along their spines
and made the hair on their backs stand up. Slowly they backed off.
Laiva sighed. Safe - for the moment. She pushed some twigs and
leaves into the fire and leaned back, letting her back slide down the
tree trunk. She hugged her shins and let her head sink onto her knees.
It wouldn't be too hard to keep the fire going for some time, a couple
of hours at least, but after that... She didn't allow herself to
finish the thought. She didn't want to. For now the wolves kept well
away from the fire, even if they were still there. Waiting. Watching.
The glow of their cold yellow eyes gave them away.
A thought struck her; the fire kept her out of the reach of
the wolves, but that didn't mean the wolves were out of her reach as
well, did it? Slowly she took out her bow and slipped the sinew into
place. The wolves didn't move. She selected an arrow and put it on.
The wolves still didn't move. Laiva raised the bow, yanked the arrow
back and released it. A high pitched yelp was the answer and a pair of
eyes had gone. To her horror, however, they quickly reappeared,
accompanied by a low, very definite growl. The bow dropped from
Laiva's hand. She was sure she had hit; the arrow had gone straight
for the spot between the eyes. The very eyes that were just coming
closer. She shuffled to her feet just in time to see the creature
stepping into the light of the fire.
Laiva gulped. She recognized the creature, but it couldn't be.
It mustn't! She had killed it back on the road! It had been dead! A
single word escaped her lips as she made the connection. It was hardly
a whisper, not audible by anyone but herself, but it said more than a
thousand others could have.
'Werewolves.'
Laiva glanced down. Her bow was still lying on the ground. Not
that it mattered. Cold fear filled every part of her body. Laiva
trembled. She closed the eyes and waited for the end.
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(Msg. 2) Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 6:55 am
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SOMEBODY COMMENT ALREADY!
....and I even proof read it this time...
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(Msg. 3) Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 11:56 am
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emmel schreef:
> ...and I even proof read it this time...

here:
[snip]
> that left her complete front open for attack. On the tree she would
> have been out of reach, but none of the trees had low enough branches
> to climb them in a hurry. If she only had anything to defend her. They

defend her. The

[snip]
> towards it. The wood started to smoke and small flames erupted from
> its surface; a moment later the branch was ablaze.
> It hadn't been a moment too early either. The wolves had just

a moment too soon either.

> caught up on her and were about to throw themselves at Laiva when the

caught up with her

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(Msg. 4) Posted: Fri Aug 31, 2007 5:12 pm
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emmel schreef:
[snip]
> A thought struck her; the fire kept her out of the reach of
> the wolves, but that didn't mean the wolves were out of her reach as
> well, did it? Slowly she took out her bow and slipped the sinew into
> place. The wolves didn't move. She selected an arrow and put it on.
> The wolves still didn't move. Laiva raised the bow, yanked the arrow
> back and released it. A high pitched yelp was the answer and a pair of
> eyes had gone. To her horror, however, they quickly reappeared,
> accompanied by a low, very definite growl. The bow dropped from
> Laiva's hand. She was sure she had hit; the arrow had gone straight
> for the spot between the eyes. The very eyes that were just coming
> closer. She shuffled to her feet just in time to see the creature
> stepping into the light of the fire.
> Laiva gulped. She recognized the creature, but it couldn't be.
> It mustn't! She had killed it back on the road! It had been dead! A
> single word escaped her lips as she made the connection. It was hardly
> a whisper, not audible by anyone but herself, but it said more than a
> thousand others could have.
> 'Werewolves.'
> Laiva glanced down. Her bow was still lying on the ground. Not
> that it mattered. Cold fear filled every part of her body. Laiva
> trembled. She closed the eyes and waited for the end.

Running through the forest. Cutting up wolves. Reminds me of when I was
young ::sigh::

But just for a moment I thought she shot Mynor! That would be a moment
of intense tragedy for her. Years of unwanted therapy would follow and
in the end she would kill herself just the same. But werewolves. Thank
God for the werewolves! Whole packs of them! THAT is something Laiva
knows how to deal with!

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(Msg. 5) Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 4:55 am
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On 2007-08-31, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.RemoveThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
> emmel schreef:
>> ...and I even proof read it this time...
>
> here:
> [snip]
>> that left her complete front open for attack. On the tree she would
>> have been out of reach, but none of the trees had low enough branches
>> to climb them in a hurry. If she only had anything to defend her. They
>
> defend her. The

::nods::

> [snip]
>> towards it. The wood started to smoke and small flames erupted from
>> its surface; a moment later the branch was ablaze.
>> It hadn't been a moment too early either. The wolves had just
>
> a moment too soon either.

Ah, yes. It *did* have the wrong ring to it; just couldn't figure out
why.

>> caught up on her and were about to throw themselves at Laiva when the
>
> caught up with her

You're probably right.

So besides the odd mistake... what do you *think* about it?
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(Msg. 6) Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:21 am
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On 2007-08-31, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
> emmel schreef:
> [snip]
>> A thought struck her; the fire kept her out of the reach of
>> the wolves, but that didn't mean the wolves were out of her reach as
>> well, did it? Slowly she took out her bow and slipped the sinew into
>> place. The wolves didn't move. She selected an arrow and put it on.
>> The wolves still didn't move. Laiva raised the bow, yanked the arrow
>> back and released it. A high pitched yelp was the answer and a pair of
>> eyes had gone. To her horror, however, they quickly reappeared,
>> accompanied by a low, very definite growl. The bow dropped from
>> Laiva's hand. She was sure she had hit; the arrow had gone straight
>> for the spot between the eyes. The very eyes that were just coming
>> closer. She shuffled to her feet just in time to see the creature
>> stepping into the light of the fire.
>> Laiva gulped. She recognized the creature, but it couldn't be.
>> It mustn't! She had killed it back on the road! It had been dead! A
>> single word escaped her lips as she made the connection. It was hardly
>> a whisper, not audible by anyone but herself, but it said more than a
>> thousand others could have.
>> 'Werewolves.'
>> Laiva glanced down. Her bow was still lying on the ground. Not
>> that it mattered. Cold fear filled every part of her body. Laiva
>> trembled. She closed the eyes and waited for the end.
>
> Running through the forest. Cutting up wolves. Reminds me of when I was
> young ::sigh::

Hm... never actually did that. Walking, yes, but running. Not that there
are that many thick and large forest around anyway...

> But just for a moment I thought she shot Mynor! That would be a moment
> of intense tragedy for her. Years of unwanted therapy would follow and
> in the end she would kill herself just the same. But werewolves. Thank
> God for the werewolves! Whole packs of them! THAT is something Laiva
> knows how to deal with!

Well, actually she doesn't. And she wouldn't have known Mynor by then so
there wouldn't be much reason for any psychological problems... but it's
nice that the whole Mynor/werewolve mixup actually works. A bit.
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(Msg. 7) Posted: Sat Sep 01, 2007 4:23 pm
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emmel schreef:
> On 2007-08-31, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.RemoveThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>> emmel schreef:
>> [snip]
>>> A thought struck her; the fire kept her out of the reach of
>>> the wolves, but that didn't mean the wolves were out of her reach as
>>> well, did it? Slowly she took out her bow and slipped the sinew into
>>> place. The wolves didn't move. She selected an arrow and put it on.
>>> The wolves still didn't move. Laiva raised the bow, yanked the arrow
>>> back and released it. A high pitched yelp was the answer and a pair of
>>> eyes had gone. To her horror, however, they quickly reappeared,
>>> accompanied by a low, very definite growl. The bow dropped from
>>> Laiva's hand. She was sure she had hit; the arrow had gone straight
>>> for the spot between the eyes. The very eyes that were just coming
>>> closer. She shuffled to her feet just in time to see the creature
>>> stepping into the light of the fire.
>>> Laiva gulped. She recognized the creature, but it couldn't be.
>>> It mustn't! She had killed it back on the road! It had been dead! A
>>> single word escaped her lips as she made the connection. It was hardly
>>> a whisper, not audible by anyone but herself, but it said more than a
>>> thousand others could have.
>>> 'Werewolves.'
>>> Laiva glanced down. Her bow was still lying on the ground. Not
>>> that it mattered. Cold fear filled every part of her body. Laiva
>>> trembled. She closed the eyes and waited for the end.
>> Running through the forest. Cutting up wolves. Reminds me of when I was
>> young ::sigh::
>
> Hm... never actually did that. Walking, yes, but running. Not that there
> are that many thick and large forest around anyway...

No. Everybody keeps running through it and setting fires to it!

>> But just for a moment I thought she shot Mynor! That would be a moment
>> of intense tragedy for her. Years of unwanted therapy would follow and
>> in the end she would kill herself just the same. But werewolves. Thank
>> God for the werewolves! Whole packs of them! THAT is something Laiva
>> knows how to deal with!
>
> Well, actually she doesn't. And she wouldn't have known Mynor by then so
> there wouldn't be much reason for any psychological problems... but it's
> nice that the whole Mynor/werewolve mixup actually works. A bit.

So it is a flash back then?
::gives a puzzled look::

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(Msg. 8) Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 6:37 am
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On 2007-09-01, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.DeleteThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
> emmel schreef:
>> On 2007-08-31, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.DeleteThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>> emmel schreef:
>>> [snip]
>>>> A thought struck her; the fire kept her out of the reach of
>>>> the wolves, but that didn't mean the wolves were out of her reach as
>>>> well, did it? Slowly she took out her bow and slipped the sinew into
>>>> place. The wolves didn't move. She selected an arrow and put it on.
>>>> The wolves still didn't move. Laiva raised the bow, yanked the arrow
>>>> back and released it. A high pitched yelp was the answer and a pair of
>>>> eyes had gone. To her horror, however, they quickly reappeared,
>>>> accompanied by a low, very definite growl. The bow dropped from
>>>> Laiva's hand. She was sure she had hit; the arrow had gone straight
>>>> for the spot between the eyes. The very eyes that were just coming
>>>> closer. She shuffled to her feet just in time to see the creature
>>>> stepping into the light of the fire.
>>>> Laiva gulped. She recognized the creature, but it couldn't be.
>>>> It mustn't! She had killed it back on the road! It had been dead! A
>>>> single word escaped her lips as she made the connection. It was hardly
>>>> a whisper, not audible by anyone but herself, but it said more than a
>>>> thousand others could have.
>>>> 'Werewolves.'
>>>> Laiva glanced down. Her bow was still lying on the ground. Not
>>>> that it mattered. Cold fear filled every part of her body. Laiva
>>>> trembled. She closed the eyes and waited for the end.
>>> Running through the forest. Cutting up wolves. Reminds me of when I was
>>> young ::sigh::
>>
>> Hm... never actually did that. Walking, yes, but running. Not that there
>> are that many thick and large forest around anyway...
>
> No. Everybody keeps running through it and setting fires to it!

Not around here. Yet.

>>> But just for a moment I thought she shot Mynor! That would be a moment
>>> of intense tragedy for her. Years of unwanted therapy would follow and
>>> in the end she would kill herself just the same. But werewolves. Thank
>>> God for the werewolves! Whole packs of them! THAT is something Laiva
>>> knows how to deal with!
>>
>> Well, actually she doesn't. And she wouldn't have known Mynor by then so
>> there wouldn't be much reason for any psychological problems... but it's
>> nice that the whole Mynor/werewolve mixup actually works. A bit.
>
> So it is a flash back then?
>::gives a puzzled look::

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(Msg. 9) Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 12:01 pm
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emmel schreef:
> On 2007-09-01, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.RemoveThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>> emmel schreef:
>>> On 2007-08-31, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.RemoveThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>>> emmel schreef:
>>>> [snip]
>>>>> A thought struck her; the fire kept her out of the reach of
>>>>> the wolves, but that didn't mean the wolves were out of her reach as
>>>>> well, did it? Slowly she took out her bow and slipped the sinew into
>>>>> place. The wolves didn't move. She selected an arrow and put it on.
>>>>> The wolves still didn't move. Laiva raised the bow, yanked the arrow
>>>>> back and released it. A high pitched yelp was the answer and a pair of
>>>>> eyes had gone. To her horror, however, they quickly reappeared,
>>>>> accompanied by a low, very definite growl. The bow dropped from
>>>>> Laiva's hand. She was sure she had hit; the arrow had gone straight
>>>>> for the spot between the eyes. The very eyes that were just coming
>>>>> closer. She shuffled to her feet just in time to see the creature
>>>>> stepping into the light of the fire.
>>>>> Laiva gulped. She recognized the creature, but it couldn't be.
>>>>> It mustn't! She had killed it back on the road! It had been dead! A
>>>>> single word escaped her lips as she made the connection. It was hardly
>>>>> a whisper, not audible by anyone but herself, but it said more than a
>>>>> thousand others could have.
>>>>> 'Werewolves.'
>>>>> Laiva glanced down. Her bow was still lying on the ground. Not
>>>>> that it mattered. Cold fear filled every part of her body. Laiva
>>>>> trembled. She closed the eyes and waited for the end.
>>>> Running through the forest. Cutting up wolves. Reminds me of when I was
>>>> young ::sigh::
>>> Hm... never actually did that. Walking, yes, but running. Not that there
>>> are that many thick and large forest around anyway...
>> No. Everybody keeps running through it and setting fires to it!
>
> Not around here. Yet.

Maybe no forests around where you life??

>>>> But just for a moment I thought she shot Mynor! That would be a moment
>>>> of intense tragedy for her. Years of unwanted therapy would follow and
>>>> in the end she would kill herself just the same. But werewolves. Thank
>>>> God for the werewolves! Whole packs of them! THAT is something Laiva
>>>> knows how to deal with!
>>> Well, actually she doesn't. And she wouldn't have known Mynor by then so
>>> there wouldn't be much reason for any psychological problems... but it's
>>> nice that the whole Mynor/werewolve mixup actually works. A bit.
>> So it is a flash back then?
>> ::gives a puzzled look::
>
> You *do* realize that I started over to fix... stuff, don't you?

I had a hunch.

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(Msg. 10) Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 7:55 am
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emmel schreef:
> On 2007-09-03, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.DeleteThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>> emmel schreef:
[snip]
>>> You *do* realize that I started over to fix... stuff, don't you?
>> I had a hunch.
>
> That translates into "Sure, but I forgot it because you lazy bastard
> have a posting schedule that would make the mail look like
> faster-than-light delivery."?

No, the #4 did. Seemed like a funny way to count!

That and your post about Laiva not having met Mynor yet. These episodes
/are/ new to me I think. But not to you ::smiles::

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(Msg. 11) Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 8:43 am
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On 2007-09-03, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
> emmel schreef:
>> On 2007-09-01, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>> emmel schreef:
>>>> On 2007-08-31, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>>>> emmel schreef:
>>>>> [snip]
>>>>>> Laiva glanced down. Her bow was still lying on the ground. Not
>>>>>> that it mattered. Cold fear filled every part of her body. Laiva
>>>>>> trembled. She closed the eyes and waited for the end.
>>>>> Running through the forest. Cutting up wolves. Reminds me of when I was
>>>>> young ::sigh::
>>>> Hm... never actually did that. Walking, yes, but running. Not that there
>>>> are that many thick and large forest around anyway...
>>> No. Everybody keeps running through it and setting fires to it!
>>
>> Not around here. Yet.
>
> Maybe no forests around where you life??

No burning ones at least.

>>>>> But just for a moment I thought she shot Mynor! That would be a moment
>>>>> of intense tragedy for her. Years of unwanted therapy would follow and
>>>>> in the end she would kill herself just the same. But werewolves. Thank
>>>>> God for the werewolves! Whole packs of them! THAT is something Laiva
>>>>> knows how to deal with!
>>>> Well, actually she doesn't. And she wouldn't have known Mynor by then so
>>>> there wouldn't be much reason for any psychological problems... but it's
>>>> nice that the whole Mynor/werewolve mixup actually works. A bit.
>>> So it is a flash back then?
>>> ::gives a puzzled look::
>>
>> You *do* realize that I started over to fix... stuff, don't you?
>
> I had a hunch.

That translates into "Sure, but I forgot it because you lazy bastard
have a posting schedule that would make the mail look like
faster-than-light delivery."?
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(Msg. 12) Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:55 am
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On 2007-09-04, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.DeleteThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
> emmel schreef:
>> On 2007-09-03, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.DeleteThis@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>> emmel schreef:
> [snip]
>>>> You *do* realize that I started over to fix... stuff, don't you?
>>> I had a hunch.
>>
>> That translates into "Sure, but I forgot it because you lazy bastard
>> have a posting schedule that would make the mail look like
>> faster-than-light delivery."?
>
> No, the #4 did. Seemed like a funny way to count!

Ah, and I thought the v2 gave it away...

> That and your post about Laiva not having met Mynor yet. These episodes
> /are/ new to me I think. But not to you ::smiles::

Erm, actually they *are*. After all I'm just writing them... and things
have already started changing a bit. Things is I wasn't content with the
style of the early ones, and not only because I started using indents
only a lot later. The main problem, however, is that certain stuff came
out a bit wrong due to not following not any plan. It always bothered me
for that elf stuff to take so damn little time. I mean, how much can you
get aclimatized in a completely different cluture in just a week or two?
Even with magic. And of course those robed people are acting...
inapropriately. You'd start slow and throwing in more and more resources
as thing are going down the gully, but they are putting them to use in a
somewhat random fashion. That's why I decided to restart the whole
thing. And I can elaborate a bit as well. I mean, after all I have a map
now, there have been names given to places the coutryside is more well
defined. And the place started to aquire a history of its own. I haven't
written it down anywhere (well, there are some notes, but nothing final
and definitely nothing you'd have access to), but it *does* change
things. Hm... if I managed to write the story as fast as this rant I
could post a hundred lines a day - or at least each week. Oh, well. If
you are still reading: Congrats. You made it. Now you can freak out and
throw rotten tomatoes at me. Just remember never to eat any 'special bbq
sauce' I might offer you when you do. I have a somewhat strange sense of
humor sometimes. And no, the tomatoes wouldn't be the wrost part of it.
Trust me on that one. EOR (end of rant)
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(Msg. 13) Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:56 am
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emmel schreef:
> On 2007-09-04, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>> emmel schreef:
>>> On 2007-09-03, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>>> emmel schreef:
>> [snip]
>>>>> You *do* realize that I started over to fix... stuff, don't you?
>>>> I had a hunch.
>>> That translates into "Sure, but I forgot it because you lazy bastard
>>> have a posting schedule that would make the mail look like
>>> faster-than-light delivery."?
>> No, the #4 did. Seemed like a funny way to count!
>
> Ah, and I thought the v2 gave it away...
>
>> That and your post about Laiva not having met Mynor yet. These episodes
>> /are/ new to me I think. But not to you ::smiles::
>
> Erm, actually they *are*. After all I'm just writing them... and things
> have already started changing a bit. Things is I wasn't content with the
> style of the early ones, and not only because I started using indents
> only a lot later. The main problem, however, is that certain stuff came
> out a bit wrong due to not following not any plan. It always bothered me
> for that elf stuff to take so damn little time. I mean, how much can you
> get aclimatized in a completely different cluture in just a week or two?
> Even with magic. And of course those robed people are acting...
> inapropriately. You'd start slow and throwing in more and more resources
> as thing are going down the gully, but they are putting them to use in a
> somewhat random fashion. That's why I decided to restart the whole
> thing. And I can elaborate a bit as well. I mean, after all I have a map
> now, there have been names given to places the coutryside is more well
> defined. And the place started to aquire a history of its own. I haven't
> written it down anywhere (well, there are some notes, but nothing final
> and definitely nothing you'd have access to), but it *does* change
> things. Hm... if I managed to write the story as fast as this rant I
> could post a hundred lines a day - or at least each week. Oh, well. If
> you are still reading: Congrats. You made it. Now you can freak out and
> throw rotten tomatoes at me. Just remember never to eat any 'special bbq
> sauce' I might offer you when you do. I have a somewhat strange sense of
> humor sometimes. And no, the tomatoes wouldn't be the wrost part of it.
> Trust me on that one. EOR (end of rant)

::throws tomato::
::misses::
::hits Red Dragon::

Thomas
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(Msg. 14) Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:56 am
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Thomas J. Boschloo wrote:
> emmel schreef:
>> On 2007-09-04, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam RemoveThis @hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>> emmel schreef:
>>>> On 2007-09-03, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam RemoveThis @hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>>>> emmel schreef:
>>> [snip]
>>>>>> You *do* realize that I started over to fix... stuff, don't you?
>>>>> I had a hunch.
>>>> That translates into "Sure, but I forgot it because you lazy bastard
>>>> have a posting schedule that would make the mail look like
>>>> faster-than-light delivery."?
>>> No, the #4 did. Seemed like a funny way to count!
>> Ah, and I thought the v2 gave it away...
>>
>>> That and your post about Laiva not having met Mynor yet. These episodes
>>> /are/ new to me I think. But not to you ::smiles::
>> Erm, actually they *are*. After all I'm just writing them... and things
>> have already started changing a bit. Things is I wasn't content with the
>> style of the early ones, and not only because I started using indents
>> only a lot later. The main problem, however, is that certain stuff came
>> out a bit wrong due to not following not any plan. It always bothered me
>> for that elf stuff to take so damn little time. I mean, how much can you
>> get aclimatized in a completely different cluture in just a week or two?
>> Even with magic. And of course those robed people are acting...
>> inapropriately. You'd start slow and throwing in more and more resources
>> as thing are going down the gully, but they are putting them to use in a
>> somewhat random fashion. That's why I decided to restart the whole
>> thing. And I can elaborate a bit as well. I mean, after all I have a map
>> now, there have been names given to places the coutryside is more well
>> defined. And the place started to aquire a history of its own. I haven't
>> written it down anywhere (well, there are some notes, but nothing final
>> and definitely nothing you'd have access to), but it *does* change
>> things. Hm... if I managed to write the story as fast as this rant I
>> could post a hundred lines a day - or at least each week. Oh, well. If
>> you are still reading: Congrats. You made it. Now you can freak out and
>> throw rotten tomatoes at me. Just remember never to eat any 'special bbq
>> sauce' I might offer you when you do. I have a somewhat strange sense of
>> humor sometimes. And no, the tomatoes wouldn't be the wrost part of it.
>> Trust me on that one. EOR (end of rant)
>
> ::throws tomato::
> ::misses::
> ::hits Red Dragon::
>
> Thomas

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(Msg. 15) Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 12:55 pm
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On 2007-09-06, Red Dragon <agclurker.TakeThisOut@lurkerson.net> wrote:
> Thomas J. Boschloo wrote:
>> emmel schreef:
>>> On 2007-09-04, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>>> emmel schreef:
>>>>> On 2007-09-03, Thomas J. Boschloo <nospam.TakeThisOut@hccnet.nl> wrote:
>>>>>> emmel schreef:
>>>> [snip]
>>>>>>> You *do* realize that I started over to fix... stuff, don't you?
>>>>>> I had a hunch.
>>>>> That translates into "Sure, but I forgot it because you lazy bastard
>>>>> have a posting schedule that would make the mail look like
>>>>> faster-than-light delivery."?
>>>> No, the #4 did. Seemed like a funny way to count!
>>> Ah, and I thought the v2 gave it away...
>>>
>>>> That and your post about Laiva not having met Mynor yet. These episodes
>>>> /are/ new to me I think. But not to you ::smiles::
>>> Erm, actually they *are*. After all I'm just writing them... and things
>>> have already started changing a bit. Things is I wasn't content with the
>>> style of the early ones, and not only because I started using indents
>>> only a lot later. The main problem, however, is that certain stuff came
>>> out a bit wrong due to not following not any plan. It always bothered me
>>> for that elf stuff to take so damn little time. I mean, how much can you
>>> get aclimatized in a completely different cluture in just a week or two?
>>> Even with magic. And of course those robed people are acting...
>>> inapropriately. You'd start slow and throwing in more and more resources
>>> as thing are going down the gully, but they are putting them to use in a
>>> somewhat random fashion. That's why I decided to restart the whole
>>> thing. And I can elaborate a bit as well. I mean, after all I have a map
>>> now, there have been names given to places the coutryside is more well
>>> defined. And the place started to aquire a history of its own. I haven't
>>> written it down anywhere (well, there are some notes, but nothing final
>>> and definitely nothing you'd have access to), but it *does* change
>>> things. Hm... if I managed to write the story as fast as this rant I
>>> could post a hundred lines a day - or at least each week. Oh, well. If
>>> you are still reading: Congrats. You made it. Now you can freak out and
>>> throw rotten tomatoes at me. Just remember never to eat any 'special bbq
>>> sauce' I might offer you when you do. I have a somewhat strange sense of
>>> humor sometimes. And no, the tomatoes wouldn't be the wrost part of it.
>>> Trust me on that one. EOR (end of rant)
>>
>> ::throws tomato::
>> ::misses::
>> ::hits Red Dragon::
>
> Oh, I stand up for ONE second and look what happens! Free food!

Hey, that's mine!
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(Don't forget to remove the ** bit)

Official AGC feedback maniac

"God is playing creatures - and we're the norns."

"A hundred dead are a tragedy - a hundred thousand are statistics."

"I guess you can call yourself lucky." -
"I could, but Linda suits me a little better... Smile
Things called lucky tend to get hit by trucks."

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